The use of many words when fewer would do, especially in an attempt to be vague or evasive.
(Oxford Dictionaries)
Here we are again! I don't know about you, but there are times when long, drawn-out phrases seem appropriate. At other times I prefer my writing to be short, sweet and to the point. Here are a few more phrases I come across on a regular basis which can be replaced with just one word:
Instead of: Try:
along the lines of like
all the time always
as well as and
at the present time now
because of the fact that because
by means of by
for the purpose of for
for the reason that because
have the ability to can
in all likelyhood likely
in order to to
in regards to about
in the event that if
on two separate occasions twice
on the occasion of when
reach out to contact
the majority of most
with that being said therefore
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ReplyDeleteYour blogs always help me tighten my writing, Piper! When I look through my manuscripts, I always find things from your list I can use.
ReplyDeleteTIghten, lighten - these words come to mind when unloading the baggage of sloppy, verbose writing.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that caught my eye in Shoshanah's initial Comments on this thread was whether it "prints well." That evoked a complex question of my own in that regard: For those like me, who self-published their first two books via Amazon/CreateSpace/KDP and formatted their text using Word converted to PDF, did you notice contrasts in the light same type face (e.g. TNR 12- or 14-point) in the proofs and even the books themselves? If so, does anyone have a proven remedy, esp. since this seems to occur by piecemeal writing sessions producing such contrasts?
ReplyDeleteI wish, I had an answer for you, Phil, but I have never noticed any contrasts in any of my proofs or the actual books. Perhaps another fellow writer out there can help?
DeleteHi Piper, I love to read anything composed of 'just the right words'. It makes the experience lighter and truer and altogether more enjoyable. Ans so now I'm a fan of yours.
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